Re: WHOIS Reminder Proofreading

From: Mark E. Mallett (mem@mv.mv.com)
Date: Wed Nov 05 2003 - 21:02:29 EST


On Wed, Nov 05, 2003 at 03:35:59PM -0800, Robert L Mathews wrote:
> This is pedantic, I know, but it's important to me:

As one pedant to another... :-)

> I'd appreciate it if OpenSRS would please fix the following text problems
> in the hard-coded part of the WHOIS reminders before they start getting
> sent.
>
> 1. In the line "ICANN, the organization responsible for the stable
> operation of the Domain Name System...", "Domain Name System" should not
> be capitalized.

I would capitalize it, as it's a proper name for a specific thing.
It's "The Domain Name System" as opposed to "a domain name system."

> 2. At the end of that sentence, there are two spaces instead of one
> between "registration. Please".

Supposed to be two spaces between the end of a sentence and the
start of the next. Looks proper to me.

mm



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